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05 April 2010 @ 07:50 pm
Loving You, Chapter 1 (Revised)  
Loving You
Poster credit to xherodbskx at http://www.artsyasiancrew.co.nr/



Title: Loving You
Author: missvue09
Length: 1 of ??
Pairings: Junchun (main), JunhoxYoochun
Genre: angst, drama, romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: character death, fast paced
Disclaimer: I do not own the boys.  This story is the work of missvue09 (aka miss_yoosu on winglin). Any resemblance to another fanfic is absolutely coincidental.


Summary: Junho chose Yoochun over his family when his father gave him an ultimatum. After two years of no contact with his family, he is finally returning home with his husband (Yoochun) to visit his mother in the hospital.


Fictitious characters

Mr. Kim = Kim Sung Ho

Mrs. Kim = Kim Hee Jin

Dr. Jung = Jung Junjin

Note: Yunjae and the Kim twins are all going to be two years older than Yoochun in the fic.

And the hotel the Kims own is named the Aria.


Prologue

Loving You

Chapter 1

Two years later.

Junho changed out of his work clothes when his cell phone rang. He glanced at the screen, the caller, unknown.

“Hello?”

“Son…” came a man’s voice, one that he recognized and have not heard in over two years.

“Aboji?”

“Yes, son.  It’s me.”

Junho was in such a shock when he heard his father called him ‘son’ again that he had to sit on the side of his bed.  Two years had past since Kim Junho left his family to be with his lover, Park Yoochun.  After he left his home, young hotel manager had driven to Yoochun’s apartment, where he told him everything and cried in his lover’s arms all night.  The following day, they decided to leave Seoul and to start their life anew some place else in South Korea.

A few months later, the couple got married.  Yoochun’s wedding ring had belonged to Junho’s paternal grandmother.  It had been her wedding ring as well.  When Junho became of age, she had passed it down to him to give to his love when he proposes.  Their wedding day was definitely one of the happiest days of their lives.

Junho wondered why was his father calling now.  If it meant that his father had accepted Yoochun.

“There’s something you should know.  It’s your mother,” his father continued.

He started to feel panic.  “What’s wrong with mom?  Did she get hurt? Is she all right?” he asked worriedly.

“The doctor says that she does not have much time left.  She wishes to see you one last time.  Won’t you come home now, son?”

‘What about Yoochun?’ Junho desperately wanted to ask but was afraid of the answer.

Noticing the silence from Junho, his father quickly added, “And bring Yoochun with you, too.  Your mother and I would love to meet him.”

Junho’s hopes rose a little.  “Really, Dad?”

“Yes, son,” Sung Ho answered truthfully.  “Look, Junho, I’m really sorry I made you choose between your lover and your family.  I was stupid for being confident that you would pick your family over Yoochun.  Do you think you could ever forgive me?”

Junho fought back the tears.  He knew this day would come, when his dad would finally accept Yoochun.  “Of course, I can forgive you, Dad. I love you.”

“I love you, too, son.”

~:~:~:~:~

That phone call took place hours ago.  Now, he and Yoochun were driving back to Seoul to visit his mother in the hospital.

Junho glanced over to the passenger’s seat and sighed when he saw Yoochun biting his fingernails again.  His spouse always did this whenever he was nervous about something.  Junho was feeling nervous, too.  After all, who wouldn’t be anxious about seeing his family for the first time in two years?

“Chun…” he said to gain his husband’s attention after turning to focus on the road again.

Park Yoochun—or, Kim Yoochun—looked up from his fingers and hummed inquisitively at his husband of eighteen months, “Hmm?”

Junho continued, “If you continue to bite your nails like that, you’re not gonna be able to leave scratch marks on my back anymore whenever we make love.”

Yoochun’s eyes widened, his anxiety completely forgotten.

“Am I right?” Junho added before he turned to give Yoochun a greasy smile and wiggle his eyebrows up and down.

“Y-yah!” Yoochun struggled to conceal his embarrassment within his voice.  “Is that all you can think about at a time like this?!  Can’t you see how nervous I am?!”

Junho chuckled.  “Honey, I do see it.  I was only trying to distract you, which I might add, turned out to be a successful attempt.”  He smiled smugly to himself, focusing on the road again.

Yoochun rolled his eyes and huffed a ‘whatever’ at his husband.  Crossing his arms across his chest, he turned to look out the window.  Junho’s words replayed in Yoochun’s head, causing him to blush again.

‘Damn you, Junnie!’ he cursed his husband in his head.

Yoochun was distracted.  His mind wandered back to the morning after their first night together.  The couple had decided to take a shower together that morning.  When the water drizzled down Junho’s back, the man had let out a painful scream.  Horrified for his lover’s life, Yoochun turned Junho’s body around to see what had caused him to scream out painfully.

His eyes had widened at the sight of scratch marks on his lover’s back.  Yoochun had blushed a bright red when he realized that he made those scratch marks from the night before, when he had dug his fingernails into the skin of Junho’s back when his lover had first entered him.

Yoochun’s face was extremely warm now from all of the blushing upon reminiscing of his and Junho’s first time together.  He turned to look if Junho had noticed.  Luckily, his husband had not, or Junho would have teased him nonstop.

Junho’s attention was on the road.  Next thing he knew, he felt his spouse’s lips on his cheeks.  He turned to Yoochun and raised a quizzical brow when he saw him smiling at him.

“Thanks for the distraction, Junnie,” Yoochun replied before he leaned in once more to give his husband a peck on the cheek.

“I love you,” he whispered into Junho’s ear.

Junho smiled contentedly and turned to look at Yoochun once more, “I love you, t—”

Beeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!!!

Junho panicked when he saw a car heading straight for them.  He jerked the wheel to the left to avoid a head-on collision.  The road was slippery due to an earlier rainstorm, causing their car to swerve off the road and to plow into a giant tree.

Yoochun flew forward and hit his head on the window.  He was immediately knocked unconscious.  The left side of Junho’s head hit the steering wheel pretty hard.  With as much strength as he had left, Junho tried to reach his arm out towards his unconscious husband.

“Y-Yoo…Ch—,” was all he managed to utter before his arm fell limp and darkness overtook him.  Forever.

~:~:~:~:~

A chilling feeling came over Kim Junsu while he was pouring water into his glass,  His grip on the the glass loosened and the glass shattered into pieces upon impact with the tiled floor.  Junsu could only stare as the water spread out across that tiny area of the floor before eventually reaching his toes.

Something was wrong. Very wrong.

“Hyung…”


~:~:~:~:~

Chapter 2

 
 
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ting5ting5 on April 6th, 2010 03:24 am (UTC)
Oh my car crash..poor Mrs Kim who didnt get to see his son...

(reading junho/chun bit weird for me..but then if nt for that then yoosu might never meet)

Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:01 am (UTC)
I wanted to be different by pairing Junho with Yoochun instead of the alternative Jaechun pairing other writers include. Plus, I wanted a character death. If I had gone with Jaechun, then that means I would have to kill Jae in my story, and I'm sure many of the readers would not like that. That's why I decided to go with Junho though I'm sure some fans would be sad about his death as well, but not as many as Jae's. Thanks for reading and commenting!
(no subject) - ting5 on April 7th, 2010 12:16 am (UTC) (Expand)
layla_zalalayla_zala on April 6th, 2010 03:32 am (UTC)
a lil bit late...
but still....

poor junho..i'm starting to like him too^^
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:24 am (UTC)
Yes, poor Junho. Thanks for reading and commenting again!
kamo_comonkamo_comon on April 6th, 2010 03:47 am (UTC)
Nuuuuuuuh~ Junho! (T______T)

kitty!Chun~ rawr! lol
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:05 am (UTC)
Lol. I'm glad someone commented about Yoochun and his nails. Thanks for reading and commenting!
(no subject) - missyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:13 am (UTC) (Expand)
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Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:04 am (UTC)
Don't worry about the exclamation marks. I'm the same way. When are you going to update your fics? Have you fixed your computer and lap top yet? Thanks for stopping by to read and comment!
(no subject) - missyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:25 am (UTC) (Expand)
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(no subject) - missyoosu on April 7th, 2010 10:09 pm (UTC) (Expand)
kpop_4everis1 on April 6th, 2010 04:14 am (UTC)
oh poor Junho..now wats gonna happen to his wife??..update soon
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:27 am (UTC)
Exactly, right? What IS going to happen to Yoochun? Nobody will know until next week. Thanks for stopping by again!
micky_susumicky_susu on April 6th, 2010 04:30 am (UTC)
Everything happened so fast. At least Chun got to tell him he loved him before the accident.
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:57 am (UTC)
Yeah, I know and I'm sorry for rushing through it. I just wanted to get to the Yoosu parts, that's why. I didn't plan on having Yoochun tell Junho that he loved him one last time, but then I thought I might as well do it since I'm killing Junho before he gets to see his family again and before they get to tell him that they love him. Thanks for stopping by again!
agnetalovekagnetalovek on April 6th, 2010 05:29 am (UTC)
I really like this story+the plot:D what happened to the other story you wrote?
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 05:45 am (UTC)
Hey, Miko! I've been working on the next chapter for my other story for awhile now, but it's been hard getting it to be just right since it's my first time writing a rated scene. So, while I was writing that chapter, this new story popped in my head and I couldn't stop myself from writing and posting it up. With this new story, I seem to have a more clear vision of what I want to write, so hopefully I won't have a problem completing this fic. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment!
farrdrtrypanophobic on April 6th, 2010 05:35 am (UTC)
/gulps. why do i have a bad bad feeling that the Kim's are so going to hate Yoochun especially Junsu?
lol. junho being the greasy one instead of our chunface. now i cant wait for the yoosu meeting.

Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 05:53 am (UTC)
We'll just have to wait for the next couple of chapters to see if your predictions are correct or not, now won't we? *evil grin*

For this fic, I wanted Yoochun to be the 'girl' (is the terminology known as 'uke' ??) of the relationship since we don't get to read that many SuChun/JunChun fics on yoosu_yongwonhi.

Thanks for continuing to read and commenting.
s.pigletsheilapiglet on April 6th, 2010 05:38 am (UTC)
oh no, poor Junho...and YC will be so devastated!...so sad for the kim family as well....wonder how the Yoosu will develop, especially since YC is technically JS's brother in law already.....awkward....anyways, looking forward to your next chapter...update soon!=)
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 05:59 am (UTC)
Well, I am looking forward to writing the Yoosu meeting. That's why everything in chapter 1 was rushed. However, they may not meet until chapter 3 or 4. And I hope it turns out as good as how I see it in my head. Thank you for reading and commenting!
juhlijuhli on April 6th, 2010 08:35 am (UTC)
gaaah, i'm so confused, there are two fics with the same title xD
Lol, i think junho/yoochun is lovely, how you portray their relationship <3
Good luck for your pressntation!
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 04:58 pm (UTC)
Lol. When it comes to naming my stories, I suck! I went through a few titles for this one before I finally settled for Loving You. First, it was called Loving a Kim...Again, but then I realized that my story isn't going to be about Yoochun loving Junsu, so I changed it to Falling in Love with a Kim...Again since Yoochun will be falling in love with another Kim (Junsu) after the death of Junho. But then I thought the title was a little long, so I changed it back to just Loving a Kim...Again. Still too long and it didn't really capture my storyline, so I shortened it to Loving You. Then I was thinking about changing it to Loving Yoochun, since it's going to be about Junsu falling in love with Yoochun, but I decided to stick to Loving You, b/c it's also a song title though the story may not have anything to do with the song at all.

Sorry for the long explanation. I'm really glad you liked Yoochun's relationship with Junho. Thank you for wishing me luck! And thank you for reading and commenting!
criztalinzcriztalinz on April 6th, 2010 09:13 am (UTC)
hey.. loving this so far!! XXDD

oh, poor chunnie and mrs Kim TT-TT.. Junho!!! he sounds very loving and he and Chunnie was so sweet together..

Aish, even though mr/mrs kim accept Yoochun, why do i have a feeling that Junsu would hate Yoochun.. well, at least at first coz this gonna be a SuChun, right?!! \(*v*)/


more bb!! *hugs*
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 05:05 pm (UTC)
Yep! This is a SuChun fic. It's my first time writing one, too! Since we don't get to read that many SuChun fics, I decided to contribute. Thank you for commenting about Yoochun's relationship with Junho, b/c that's another pairing we don't get to read too much about. You're a psychic! I guess my story is kind cliched, huh? Well, I did put that in the 'warning' in the prologue. Thanks for reading, commenting, and loving it!
jkmbrjkmbr on April 6th, 2010 02:02 pm (UTC)
To be honest,
I'm glad that you rushed through this part..
Because I'm extremely Yoosu (or in this case, JunChun) biased
and I need some Junchun lovin'
haha
the plot is interesting and I am eager to read about their relationship development (:
Haha
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 05:10 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I really wanted to get to the JunChun parts. That's why I rushed through this chapter. One day I'll return and add more stuff to it and maybe split it into a couple of parts. I'm glad you find this plot to be interesting. I was worried no one would. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment!
zoeybunnygalszoeybunnygals on April 6th, 2010 03:17 pm (UTC)
NO!!!!! Junho.......

i liking this so much and want to read more i tell you MORE

Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 6th, 2010 05:13 pm (UTC)
HEYYY!!! It's zoeybunnygals, the author of JunChun fan fiction! I just wanted to thank you for writing Junchun fics, b/c we definitely need some. That's why I decided to contribute by writing one of my own. Thank you for enjoying, reading, and commenting!
(no subject) - zoeybunnygals on April 7th, 2010 01:16 pm (UTC) (Expand)
sanchi7 on April 10th, 2010 02:14 pm (UTC)
Chunnie are you ok? Junho, sorry somehow I think it is time to say goodbye. (reading chapter 3 to confirm)
sanchi7 on April 10th, 2010 02:21 pm (UTC)
Sorry, I meant chapter 2 which you have yet to post :)

I really like how you are keeping the story so tight and fastpaced. I mean no extra meaningless passages boring the readers.

Can't wait for Chapter 2
(no subject) - missyoosu on April 10th, 2010 08:24 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - sanchi7 on April 11th, 2010 04:52 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - missyoosu on April 11th, 2010 06:37 pm (UTC) (Expand)
YunJaeyuki_3 on April 27th, 2010 09:11 am (UTC)
OMG O_O
Now Yoochun would blame himself forever for Junho's death T^T ..
this is just so sad .. poor mother waiting for her son, only to discover that he died before reaching her ..
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 27th, 2010 02:51 pm (UTC)
It's been 20 days since I posted this fic and I still get new readers! Yay! Thank you for stopping by to read and comment.
(no subject) - yuki_3 on April 28th, 2010 04:08 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - missyoosu on April 28th, 2010 05:00 pm (UTC) (Expand)
김유민meluvminnie on January 13th, 2011 01:04 pm (UTC)
*pouts* Update. Now. *glares*
xD
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on September 18th, 2011 05:28 pm (UTC)
Finally updated. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Chapter 2: http://missvue09.livejournal.com/48436.html
l o v e l y, baby.lovemochi on June 11th, 2011 02:24 am (UTC)
Omg....... D:

I did NOT see that coming. Now I get a little feeling of how Yoosu gets in the picture. Gah! Poor Junho!

I'm glad Kim-appa finally apologized to his son and Junho died with his father's approval. Still, I hate character deaths to people I like~ >.< What a dramatic ending with the glass shattering! O.O
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on June 14th, 2011 05:49 am (UTC)
Really? I did put character death as part of the warning.
Sorry for the death of Junho. It had to be done in order for Junchun (this one won't be Yoosu) to happen.

Thanks for reading this and for commenting!
Agatabakastudent on July 31st, 2011 07:07 pm (UTC)
I really like it! The idea is good. And let the JunChun romance blossom~`
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on July 31st, 2011 10:36 pm (UTC)
Aww, thank you. That means a lot from a Junchun writer like you.
I hope I don't disappoint.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
I hope you're feeling a little better today.
(no subject) - bakastudent on August 1st, 2011 08:19 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - missyoosu on August 1st, 2011 09:07 am (UTC) (Expand)
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Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on October 26th, 2011 06:39 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I do realize that I write short chapters even though I crave for long updates from Yoosu writers like you. *feels guilty*

I am working on writing longer chapters though. Chapter 3 was pretty long but then lj wouldn't let me post all of it and so I decided to split it into two chapters.
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(no subject) - missyoosu on October 26th, 2011 06:54 pm (UTC) (Expand)
samchun55samchun55 on December 25th, 2011 01:09 am (UTC)
omgggggg T_______T junhooo ...noooooooo
heartbreaking :((
he didn't get 2 see his family again ><

i'm so sad i can't read more today :(
be back 2omorrow
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on December 25th, 2011 04:29 am (UTC)
Yes, it is sad that he didn't get a chance to see his family again.
Aww. I'm sorry I made you sad. See you next time.
Thanks for reading and for commenting.
(no subject) - samchun55 on December 26th, 2011 01:04 am (UTC) (Expand)
devjacaioradevjacaiora on July 18th, 2012 03:10 pm (UTC)
people always wrote : If you keep bitting your nails you won't have any fingers left...

I love your version better! LOL
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on July 29th, 2012 12:18 am (UTC)
D'awww!!! Thank you.
vizingavizinga on November 7th, 2012 09:13 am (UTC)
OMG! My heart hurts.
This is soooooo interesting. I'm off to the next chapter.
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on November 8th, 2012 07:45 am (UTC)
Enjoy reading. ^^
krazyanna07krazyanna07 on March 27th, 2013 02:03 am (UTC)
nice second chapter! I like the use of twin telepathy! ^_^ on to the next
Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on March 27th, 2013 08:04 am (UTC)
I've always liked that about twins. Thanks for reading.
Micahmicah88 on November 8th, 2013 06:24 am (UTC)
Yeah...not gonna lie. I use my imagine a lot when I real and I definitely had trouble imagining Junho with Yoochun. But the way you wrote it gave of a very loving feel. :)
Mrs. Ichigotabetai: yoochun in bed eyesmissyoosu on November 8th, 2013 10:03 am (UTC)
Originally, Junho was supposed to be Junsu's identical twin in the story, not his fraternal twin. Thank you for the lovely comment.
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Mrs. Ichigotabetaimissyoosu on April 17th, 2014 04:24 pm (UTC)
I've always wanted to write about the twin telepathy thing with the Kim twins. :)